Question

Why isn't this thesis statement acceptable?

Answer 1

A thesis statement should be analytical, right to the point and without involving personal opinion. I believe that the answer for this is B because it’s persuading the audience in the wrong way. You usually persuade people with thesis using logos and this thesis contains none of that.

Answer 2

it is not acceptable because a thesis should never begin with "I" ( when talking to an audience, you can always add your opinion in but should never use first person like "My thoughts, I," and it is not acceptable because a thesis statement should include more than 1 ideas so your answers are B AND D