<em>Ali daily cleans his car....</em>
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In her speech in TED.Talks she says she writes to entertain and educate
This isn't neccessarily true. Your introduction can still make sense without the hook, and the information inside the introduction part should really not directly depend on the hook to explain them, they should either be self explanatory, or you should explain them there.
Hopefully this helps!
Number 2, Because we are born sinners that means if we are "natural" we don't have jesus
