“A break’ that ripples above some malady” is a figurative expression that means that behind the visible physical beauty lies some unimaginable ugliness. The attraction that is beheld may be a mighty covering of some underlying problems. It is therefore useless to rely on some physical appearances. Look deep and make your decisions in your thoughts. Never cast your net based on what you see, but based on your inner thinking.
Explanation:
"Two ways of looking at a river" was a reflection on Life on the Mississippi by Mark Twain (1883). In it he captured his personal experiences with the river. The first was the period when he had not discovered the waters, when he was filled with admiration and wonder. The second period was when he had experienced the full force of the river, with its sometimes dangerous tides. In life, there are always more than more perception of events and things. Never run away with the first, because it is not the only view of life.
This paragraph lacks sentence variety because the writer, started sentence after sentence the <em>same way</em>. didn't include structure with proper legth or that provides emphasis. <em>Prepositional phrase, adverbial clause, adverbs</em> (absolutely; naturally) or some<em> connective</em> (therefore; and; besides etc) are great help to <em>avoid monotony.</em>