I THINK I DID THIS RIGHT, If i did it wrong, explain further and i'll try again.
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The boy walked slowly across the garden happily, his steps that were planted across the pavement echoed rapidly in the atmosphere. Every few steps there would be a pause as if waiting for something to happen, slowly, with further inspection you would be able to see the boy behaving sheepishly around a small dog who was generously able to give the child love and affection. The dog's coat was a dark copper colour that matched the boy's own hair.
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