One night, all the animals at Mr. Jones' Manor Farm assemble in a barn to hear old Major, a pig, describe a dream he had about a world where all animals live free from the tyranny of their human masters
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This is the correct form of that sentence
Explanation:
My grandmother asked us if we wanted to be at her home this weekend, and my sister and I couldn't go because we both had a soccer game. However, we still have a party to go on Saturday night.
To improve a conclusion, a writer must bare in mind that it should not address a new topic, that is to say, it has to be a recompilation of the topics already mentioned and developed in the paragraphs, so it has to be a kind of "summary", an overall of the topics and ideas discussed. It should be concise and the reader needs to be know it is the conclusion and you are not going to keep on working on the ideas, so sometimes, it is necessary to include the words "to conclude"/ "to round up"/ "in conclusion" or something similar on order to let the reader know you are about to finish.
