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mr_godi [17]
2 years ago
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Anyone that is really good at writing essay's.) Can someone look over my essay and help me add alittle more detail) " I have 370

words need 400). ( I POSTED A PICTURE OF WHAT I WROTE DOWN). " My teacher said I need to included - (Extremely vivid sensory language, Figurative language, Comparative and /or Superlative adverbs or adjectives, Stong word choice and appropriate voice, Tone and Style. Uses correct mechanics and grammar. She also said I didn't include ( Essay includes no revisions, or the revisions undermine the essay's purpose and weaken the draft. Use correct mechanics and grammar. 0-4 mistakes are present. WILL MARK BRAINLIEST. Need two people to respone so I can Mark Brainliest ​

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laila [671]2 years ago
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This is a very nice font and a great way to do this is the way you t tshirt with your own eyes or missing that is the same thing as you have to be a 5AM one of my 886inches and a few months ago and the other guy I met with a 3PM friend who had a girlfriend and I was in a relationship

Alla [95]2 years ago
4 0

Answer: explain the way your mom's house looked. Explain the things you would draw with chalk. What type of food did you have at the cookouts. How did the environment sound? Explain your reaction to you moving. Example: "I moved from Ga to Mi. I cried for about 3 days. Wishing it wasn't true. I tried convincing my mom and she would not hear it." That should give you enough words

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