OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
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<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
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Answer:
Four evidences that Earth rotates are:
1) Slightly squashed at its poles
2) Slightly bulged at its equator
3) Changing of day and night in different places
4) The rotation was proved by the scientist Foucalt in 1851 when he noticed that his pendulum's sweep direction changed orientation at the rate of 11° per hour.
Answer:
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active voice
Explanation:
think about "to be" in a sentce, would it be awake / excited tone or would it be calm / regular talking tone.
You can make the word astray
