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Incorrect: They loved an movie. I will be here in a hour. Pat works at an University.
Correct: Now I have a house and I am happy.
Parallax is the apparent displacement or the difference in apparent direction of an object as seen from two different points of view
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When writing any research paper or essay, you should restate your thesis in your conclusion paragraph. This paragraph has the sole paragraph of giving a quick synopsis of what you just wrote about, and you need to refresh your reader on the point of your essay. For example, my thesis for a recent research paper I completed was, (volunteering benefits both individuals and society and has significant benefits to improve the lives of ourselves and others.) Try to rephrase your thesis a little bit. For example I'd say, (volunteering benefits our world and improves the lives of all it inspires.) Something along those lines. Good luck and I hope this helped.
