Lisa notices an error in **grammar** in the first paragraph of the text.
present tense
when we are describing events that happen in works of literature we should describe it in the present tense because literature is all about presents works although there a little of old works. literature is all about life characterization of humans because it deals with our emotions, feelings. it deals with prose, drama, and poetry.
Answer:
Comma splice.
Explanation:
A comma splice occurs when two independent clauses are joined together by a comma to be used as a single sentence. This construction is wrong as the two independent clauses need to be joined by a conjunction to be taken as a single sentence or be separated into two sentences.
In the given sentence, the error is in the use of the comma between "de sks" and "for example...". Instead of the comma, we can use a period/ full-stop, thereby making it into two independent sentences.
Thus, the correct construction will be
<em>Most office workers spend more than fifty percent of their time at their desks. For example, they spend their time preparing documents, answering calls, and scheduling appointments.</em>
Circle probably not right
The question is asking to complete the said passage that ask what is the pleasure dome most likely represent in Kubla Khan, and base on my research, it represents evil or bad vibes. I hope you are satisfied with my answer and feel free to ask for more.
