In an intro to any essay, you want to hint at what is to come. But to start- you want to have a thesis and a hook. A thesis is what you want the reader to take away- what your main point is about your essay. A hook could be a rhetorical device, such as a statement using facts (logos- one rhetorical device), or something along those lines. So ask yourself- what are you trying to get the reader to THINK or what are you trying to get the reader to DO? Best of luck! Let me know if you need any more help.
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adjectives are great for describing things.
Instead of “I will go into the forest.” We could have “I will go into the scary forest” or “I will go into the beautiful forest”
It’s just good for describing and adding depth into your writing, or something.
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You could make your hook more interesting by adding more descriptive language and steady suspense. Instead of “a student walks into a school”, which sounds fairly ordinary, you can immersify the reader by replacing words such as “walks” with “steps”. You could also add more description on the setting, such as if her steps are making any echos or noises, or if the school is dark and empty, etc. I can help you more if you need me to, just comment below.
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Symbols, Imagery, and figurative language
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