Hello!
A proper way to revise this sentence is:
"I have read that the huge city of Tokyo, the capital of Japan, has over 30 million people."
I hope this helps you! Have a great day!
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yes those are good
Explanation:
you can also write stuff like does the readers understand, or what is the problem and solution
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You are so stupid and lazy find the answers yourself its in the book.
Both of them go on place to another