Lauren is writing an article for the local newspaper about adopting a pet from the shelter. She needs to revise her article so i
t is more heartfelt and convinces readers to adopt a shelter pet. Which task would be most appropriate for Lauren to do while revising the article? to replace weak words and phrases with more concrete ones
to describe the layout of the shelter in detail so people know what to expect
to include personal experiences of people who have adopted from the shelter
to add clear and logical transitions between ideas
Answer: the scare crow was missing so many things and dorothy help him get them the tin man was stuck so dorothy oiled his hinges and the lion wanted to be brave and dorothy helped him face his fears
