I guess it would either be mood or syntax
<u>O way it handles things on streets</u>
Explanation:
There is a needless ambiguity in this phrase that would just confuse the reader. it is not good prose when you can use just as many words and explain what the problem is but instead just use the word 'things' to describe them.
<u>The sentence begs to understand what exactly it is that the car does not understand on the road or has a difficulty to follow but this is left unanswered in the text of the paragraph.</u>
So this is where the author must re question their word choice for the passage.
If someone wanted to be a Archivist, they would have to work hard for it. If i can I would copy and past my last one of this but you know I can't reallt copy and past on here. But you know what I'm getting at..-
I guess-
Hope this helps? :')
Corrected:
This paper provides a summary of evidence on changes in cycling and physical activity in five towns following the first phase of the Department for Transport cycling investment programme between October 2012 and February 2017. It draws on three separately published volumes of evidence<u>: </u>Demonstration Towns monitoring report, 2012-17<u>: </u>Public Opinion Results, 2009-17<u>; </u>and Cycling Demonstration Surveys of Physical Activity, 2005-17.
I gave an explanation of the usage of semicolons and colons in another question you had, so I won't repeat it again, but still let me know if you have any questions!
