Answer:So teachers usually want you to start with a hook so my idea about a pilot would be ¨How would it be if someone you knew flew or operated and airplane!¨ stuff like that :)
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“Graduation is at seven o’clock, so don’t be late,” said Brian sternly.
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the second sentence is wordy and out of order, making it harder to understand. the first sentence is straightforward and to the point
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