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Once upon a time there was an old lady who had a stick in her hand and she lives near a river . Once because of many rains river overflowed the water and her house went away away with water . She cried for help because her two little grand daughters were also overflowed in water . She cried a lot . I was passing from nearby . I saw her crying . I saved her little granddaughters . That i arrived just in time to save the situation.
Explanation:
Can I see the passage or something?
Ineffective
effective
ineffective
Explanation:
the first one uses irrelevant and made up reasons to try to persuade her to take him with her. the next one makes sense because he is offering to help carry groceries. the last one doesn't really work, just because he used a reason that doesn't make sense.
