<span>1. </span><span>Mark had a gift for empathy; he seemed to be able to
relate to anyone’s pain and sorrow. </span>
<span>2. </span><span>Over the summer, many people plan to travel to exotic places,
and play at the beach. </span>
<span>3. </span>The short excerpt uses “I” repeatedly. I would
suggest that she erases the repeated “I” and replace them with something else.
<span>4.
</span>I am guessing that the underlined is “good at
listening and feeling my pain”? I would suggest to replace that with the
word “sentimental.”
<span>5.
</span>A synonym for
“faithfulness” is fidelity.
<span>6.
</span><span>I never thought I would
have to write and deliver the eulogy of anyone, let alone my best
friend.<span> </span></span>
What the frick the duck in bucks he’ll
Answer:
He won't mind if you are staring at him.
Explanation:
The verb in the sentence is <em>stare</em>. So, the word becomes <em>stare</em> - e + ing = star + ing = staring. But you cannot just leave the verb there; you need to add "are" in front of "staring" to make the sentence more coherent.
Hope this helps!
Another: "The opposing sides lit up the air with speeding bullets as... ( whatever was happening)" Try to describe the scenes/actions and use figurative language.
Answer: he sees he's true side
Explanation: