I'm thinking of entering a cooking contest next month but I don't know what to cook for

If there are any K-12 students over here please help me ASAP.I only have one more attempt for the VAVA attendance quiz

kykrilka [37]

Answer:

1. Sentence fragment- Add the missing subject or verb to make the sentence complete.

2. Run-on sentence- Break the sentence into two or more small sentences, or add punctuation to show the reader where the breaks are.

3. Too many sentences of the same length- Revise your sentence lengths to have a strong balance of short, medium, and long sentences. This can be shown visually by highlighting your draft.

4. First three words of sentences repeated- Use a thesaurus or other resource to swap it out for another word- there are many to chose from.

5. Overused transition word- Rephrase one of the repeated phrases to something else to keep your reader from getting bored.

Explanation:

In writing any academic paper, there are certain issues that make it incorrect, or incomplete or excessively expressed, or written. These issues depend on how the sentences are framed, the use of words, structuring, or even repetition.

The various writing issues and how they can be resolved are given as follows-

1. Sentence fragment

This happens when a fragment or piece of a sentence is left alone, making the sentence incomplete and thus, wrong. So, by adding the verb or the missing subject, the sentence becomes complete and correct.

2. Run-on sentence

A run-on sentence is when several sentences are put together in a single sentence, resulting in a long-running sentence. To remedy this issue, we can break the sentences into shorter, simpler sentences or add punctuations such as the comma or other signs to show where the breaks in the sentence are.

3. Too many sentences of the same length

When there is the issue of too many sentences of the same length, it is best to revise what's been written and make changes such as shortening the sentences. Or changing the sentences to different lengths can also help in making the writing more appealing.

4. First three words of sentences repeated

When there is a case of repetition of the first three words in the sentences, replacing the words with synonyms or similar words will make it interesting and readable. It will also still retain the intended meaning.

5. Overused transition word

Overusing certain transition words or phrases is one issue that makes writing unappealing. This can be altered by rephrasing the words, which will still keep the reader's interest.

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3 years ago

Besides, they are about as edible as the tough, dry bark in a long dead tree is an example of which type of comparison?

Kazeer [188]

Based on the given statement above, I can say that the type of comparison that is being shown is a SIMILE. A simile is a literary technique that compares two unlike objects with the use of the words "like" or "as...as". Apparently, this uses "as...as" in comparing "they" and "bark of a tree". Hope this helps.

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3 years ago

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Award-winning author Sonia Nazario is best known for her Pulitzer Prize-winning biography Enrique's Journey. The book brings to

Xelga [282]

“Lourdes knows. She understands, as only a mother can, the terror she is about to inflict, the ache Enrique will feel and finally the emptiness”(Nazario 1). When Enrique was only five years old, his mother Lourdes made the decision to leave her children and go north to the United States. There in the United States she hopes to find work and support her struggling family back in Honduras. In Enrique’s Journey by Sonia Nazario; a literacy non-fiction, Enrique at the age of 16 goes on a long journey from Honduras to try and find his mother Lourdes with nothing but her phone number, he is still heartbroken from her departure 11 years ago. In Antoine De Saint-Exupèry’s work of fiction titled the Little Prince; an allegory:, a pilot crashes in the Saharan desert, and meets a little boy who claims to be the prince of his planet on asteroid 325 or known by humans as B-612. While in the desert the little prince tells the pilot, his new friend, of his interactions with other various types of people around his neighboring planets. Enrique and the Pilot both learn about responsibility and what it takes to survive.

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3 years ago

The children study for the test. (change to present perfect tense)

yanalaym [24]

The children have been studying for the test

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I think my dog is the smartest dog in town. My dog knows many tricks and he always fetches the paper in the morning He does

lana [24]

Answer:

smanty is a very smart dog that knows many tricks.

Explanation:

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2 years ago