In Brazil, more specifically in the city of Rio de Janeiro, there is a famous touristic spot called the Sugar Loaf (Pão de Açúcar, in Portuguese). It is a superb mountain that towers over the blue ocean waters. Its formation is quite interesting. The mountain has a much taller and narrower side, contrasting with the other one - shorter and rounder, but also more extent. Parts of the mountain are covered with trees in different tones of green. I asked some Brazilian friends if they thought the mountain looked like a sugar loaf. They said they never thought of it like that. But many said they can see a human shape in it. As if it is a giant lying on the sand, his/her head resting on his/her hand, the elbow resting on the ground. The taller side would then be the head, the rounder side being the hips and legs.
Try using better words for the little words you use. Maybe for an example say, And this is the reason because. Or maybe another reason due to this is...
