The point of view you use to write a description is mental as well as physical
1.it was a bright sunny day in April,and the clocks were striking thirteen
This is the narrative hook. A narrative hook occurs at the beginning of a passage to get the reader interested in the rest of the story. In this hook, the speaker begins talking about what seems to be a wonderful great day. Then the reader is hit with the fact that the clocks are striking thirteen. This makes it very different than what the reader is used to. While many people use a 24 hour clock instead of a 12 hour clock, it is usually only in digital form. Therefore, the word striking is not used. Striking is used for a digital clock because the hands move and are said to strike numbers. It is rare to find a 24 hour analog clock in our setting.
Anne Frank is younger so one would assume her personality is more childish and she doesn't quite understand as much as Margot. She is more loud or open about her feelings towards others and maybe even a bit more confident. While Margot is very quiet andagrees with others and doesn't really argue or speak up as much and usually just does what shes told. But the Diary definitely shows more of Annes personality because it is from her perspective.
can you insert passage 1? thx!!
