In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.
Answer:
dragonfly
Explanation:
do you really think that is a spider, snail, or centipede
Whenever my hamster eats my book pages it makes me miffed. I can no longer read my book and i’m left on a cliffhanger. Sometimes i’ll have to end up repurchasing the book just because i want to know what happened so badly. Whenever my hamster makes me miffed I put him in his cage and watch tv until I fall asleep. My hamster is a good hamster up until i find out he has eaten my entire book. It makes me feel like my hamster did it on purpose out of envy.
