This does have alliteration of the 'b' sound if that is what you are asking. :)
A is the answer you are looking for
Well, I can’t exactly finish it for you, but if your looking to make it longer...
1. Take those three reasons and separate them into their own paragraphs.
2. Explain why each of those portray a valid reason.
(For example, for the first reason you could say, “Due to the fact that people are born with this sense, it should not only be evident that we can do this and therefore should be held accountable, but also in life or death situations it is very important that everyone is honest so it can be known exactly what has happened in a certain situation.”
3. Have two more paragraphs instead of one and be lit.
(If you only need one, you could choose the one you feel is the best and just explain that one, kind of like what I did above.)
Please work hard on this and feel free to take pieces of what I said in the example if you want. You got this, and I hope I was able to help you :)
Answer:
If a person wants to succeed in life, he or she really has to work at it.
Explanation:
the pronoun "you" does not match up with "a person." The sentence starts out in third person and then transitions to second person, so the correction fixes this.
