C. drawing open the curtains . makes no sense. should be somewhere in the beginning of the sentence instead of in the very end.
It would humanize her and make her capable of sympathy.
2- the city not a city
3-a journalist not the journalist
4-pens not the pens
5-the hill not just hill
6-the only place not an only place
I'd say "Avenging his parents' murder". That just seems like more of an Anti-Hero kind of trait.
