Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper
spelling and grammar. Darius went to the store. He wanted food. He ran into his teacher there. They talked about his latest project. He decides to Base his project on gourmet cooking
Yesterday evening, Darius went to the store because he wanted food. At that moment, he ran into his teacher there and they talked about his latest project. Eventually, he decides to base his project on gourmet cooking.
Explanation:
Transitional words or phrases create coherence within paragraphs or parts of a text, since they connect thoughts and help readers go from one idea to the next. A few temporal transitions are <em>while, during, last night, similarly </em>and <em>finally.</em>
The transition words I have used to alter the following paragraph are in CAPS.
Darius went to the store BECAUSE he wanted food. WHILE shopping, he ran into his teacher AND they talked about his latest project, WHICH he decided to base on gourmet cooking.
They were also against allowing new states to join the United States as slave states. Some people were opposed to slavery for moral reasons, and they formed a movement formed in the North called abolitionism. The movement called for the legal end to slavery in all of the United States.
