Add phrases to make the story flow smoothly (cohesian markers, pronouns , conjuctions) eliminate unnecesary details. and proofread
Harrison Bergeron is shot dead on live TV by the Handicapper-General. He'd briefly.The government in "Harrison Bergeron" is faced with a serious problem.
As verbs the difference between cry and bawl. is that cry is to shed tears; to weep while bawl is to shout or utter in a loud and intense manner.
So it should be "Bawling is a much louder form of crying'
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