Answer:
The revision which is the best example of adding concrete detail is:
Claire Innes was separated from the people around her during the fire and she later found them near the same place they were separated.
The other options do not apply because the original sentence does not talk about Claire Innes' parents or family
Claire Innes became separated from her parents as the flames spread through the city, and she later found them.
In the panic, Claire Innes was separated from her family as they fled, and she was reunited with her father after the fire was extinguished.
In the panic, Claire Innes became separated from her brothers and sisters during the fire and she later found them after the fire was put out.
Explanation:
1) As I sat on what I thought was my deathbed, I believed that leaf was connected to my life force. That once it became dry and fell, I would die along with it.
2) The leaf was special to me because I believed that we were the same. Just waiting for the day we were blown away in an angry storm. We both were just barely hanging on until we died.
Hope this helps! If you need me to change anything just let me know, and I'll be happy to switch up my answer a bit! :D
Answer:
Explanation:
What does the prepositional phrase do?
It tells where Jesus was from. So it is some kind of modifier.
The answer is a (Proper) noun -- Jesus -- is what <em><u>of Nazareth</u></em> modifies.
Answer:
It is very important to keep streets clean as we should keep our surroundings clean.
Explanation:
- We should be careful not to make our surroundings dirty as that will harm us. it pollutes the air and water nearby. The garbage may also flow into drain holes and cause blockage of drains. Animals may die if they eat the things. they release bad smells which is very troubling for the people passing by. also, mosquitoes and other pests can breed and cause diseases like malaria. instead we should plant trees, throw waste in dustbins and live a sustainable life. young people can reuse plastic bags again and again. natural waste can be made to compost and put to the plants. try becoming creative with your trash instead of just throwing it out. plant some herbs in your bottles and use it for cooking, make art pieces using some items etc. "If you can't clean your surrounding, then don't make it dirty"
