<h2>HELLO EVERYONE</h2><h2>ITS ME</h2><h2>NAGITO KOMAEDA ON THE NINTENDO DS</h2><h2>AHBABHAHAHAHHAHAHHA</h2>
Answer:
To have someone else give you suggestions for improvement.
Explanation:
Peer editors can help you catch mistakes, as well as suggest ways to make your writing better.
Emotions that I felt:
Shock, dread, like a void/empty, pensive and melancholy.
Why?
There is morbid detail in this poem which relates to soldiers of war who have died.
Despite their honorable sacrifice in war, in modern times, they have become forgotten (highlighted by the indifference of the conductor) and have become associated with the grass of the Earth.
This relates to a much quoted verse from the Old Testament of the Bible “All men are flesh”.
The main principle is that men are born of dust and shall once return as dust/soil (to the Earth) - elements of this are also true even for non-believers - carbon cycle.
Certain types of punctuation that should not typically be used in formal or professional writing are the following..
Too many dashes or hyphens,( they tend to confuse the reader)
Too many commas, ( they make your writing choppy and confusing)
Unnecessary quotes,( they especially are not food when you pick one that is not pertaining to the topic)
Also, Ampersands( also known as symbols,or emoji's, except in writing, very un-professional, as well as confusing for the reader). Hope this helped! Have a good day!
