I would have to say that the best way to revise sentence four is by changing "aren't" and "they're" to "are not" and "they are."
"Argue" works better than "fight."
Deleting the entire sentence would remove the transition into cost efficiency of the tablets.
And moving the sentence to the end would place the transition to cost efficiency in the wrong place.
A because to draw attention you need a hook. conflict is a great topic to keep readers interested
Answer:
In Mary Shelley's Frankenstein, characters must reckon with the conflict between personal glory and human connection. Through the story of an alienated monster and his ambitious creator, Shelley raises themes such as familial loss, the search for belonging, and the cost of ambition. Other characters serve to reinforce the importance of community.
The first one “where it became quite dark”