Basically an upgrade from your old position
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I think, after this election especially, voting is actually beginning to matter for more people. I think our population is (hopefully) beginning to realize that they <em>can </em>have an affect on who their leader is. A reason a powerful person may not necessarily want the average citizen to know this is because they want to stay in power. If we don't know we can make a difference, we can't hurt their power. A horrible way of thinking, but unfortunately the way many power-craving people behave.
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The writers of Harlem Renaissance attempted to spread the word about beauty and richness of the work done by African Americans. In the 1920s, this took place, and America started recognizing the work done by African Americans. This movement laid the foundation of the Civil Rights movement.
