Answer:
I think it's B
Explanation:
Super sorry if I get this wrong qwq
I believe it's
B. Were swimming
Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
hoep this helps
I'd say is a, since the point of a persuasive essay is to give your opinion backed up by research with proof typically, however due to the wording by saying 'references' I don't believe it's b.
Hoped it helped! c:
- Kat