<span>While at the drive-in Two-Bit sneaks behind Johnny puts his hands on both of their shoulders and said, "Okay, greasers, you've had it!" Johnny had recently been jumped by a gang of Socs and is still traumatized by the experience.
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So, I am writing an essay too! I made an outline, and you can fit it to yours. Here you go:
<span>Title
Paragraph one:
Thesis
Introduction
:-Character development
-Hazel and George
-Harrison
Paragraph three:
-Talk about how Hazel and George sets the standard for “perfectly average” and “above average
-Talk about the role that Hazel plays-Talk about the role George plays
Paragraph four:
-Talk about Harrison’s difference from everyone in the society of 2081
-Talk about the role that Harrison plays
-Talk about how Harrison highlights how unjust the system is
Paragraph five:
Conclusion:
-Wrap Harrison, George, and Hazel back and nicely summarize why characterization is the element that most makes the story interesting and understandable.
Just fit that outline to work for your essay and get writing! It's working for me so far!
Good luck! Have a great day!</span>
Answer:
By just reading the beginning, I can tell it's pretty good! A few suggestions: Try not to use "also" in the beginning of a sentence. I feel like it sounds a bit unprofessional. This sort of goes for "this also". One last thing, when putting in the name of an article for example, make sure to put quotes. I would also recommend to state where you cited textual evidence, not really for articles, but just for the future. Besides that, looking good!
I know it's pretty late but I thought I'd still respond
Well from what i read everything hope this helps :)