yes, it would have a slight difference because you would have a lot friendly chat with your friends than your grandparents because we show respect for elders. modify this answer! :)
15th September, 2013
6/A Bashabo, Dhaka
Dear Tom,
I am glad to receive your letter. In the letter you have wanted to know about my preparation for the coming examination. I am now writing about it.
You will be very glad to know that I have made a fair progress in my preparation. So, nowadays I am a bit more confident because I have totally a clear understanding of the nature of the question papers in the exam. Besides, I have read the text books thoroughly and explored every nook and corner of them. Moreover, the complex questions are already memorized. Mathematics, English, General Science and Arabic are in my daily practice routine. I believe I can do well with any sorts of question. Now I am checking my weak –point.
I hope I can overcome it successfully. Pray for me so that I can achieve an expected outcome.
Your loving friend,
Alex
First paragraph:
I would change the sentence “ through out middle school years ive always gone through lots of depression, anxiety, and being unfairly judged “
I would change that to this “ Throughout my middle school years experienced depression and anxiety. Also in my years of middle school I was unfairly judged . I had always been called “mean”or “stuck” up by my class mates and fellow students because of the way I talk to people. This would always cause me to overthink and lead to me becoming more nervous hearing about the way people really think of me . I was also judged because of the way I looked such as the facial expressions that I use .
( I hoped this helped )
Dog was not concerned about the welfare of the man
