Answer:
This is actually kinda for you to have done this in 5 minutes
Explanation:
The only thing I would say is to use more detailing words.
But good job!
On one hot summer day, John & Jack, who's Jay's friends, were running like gazelles, as they ran towards the pond, laughing, and getting ready to jump inside.
hope this helps
Answer:
white fang is comforted by his mother's protection
Explanation:
things are seeming hopeless, but the mother is unrelenting in her attempt to protect her child
