Once upon a time, young girl who was the daughter of an awful queen was up in her castle drawing a picture of the view from her window of the pruned flower filled lawn. Her mother knocked at her door. The young girl was forbidden of drawing, her father had died and was an amazing artist, and ever since no art was aloud in the kingdom. The young girl didn't obey the rule because she had an over powering love for art, however she was scared to get caught so she tucked the drawing away. Her mother began to scold her for not getting ready for the royal ball that was to begin later that very night. Her mother always told her it was her fault when ever they were late or something went wrong...
it needs to be finished but here's a start haha hope it's okay...
Answer:
Don't u worry, I'll help you :3
Main idea: Continue to move forward and get your freedom
Evidence: "We can move in that direction as a country, in great
polarization—black people amongst black, white people amongst white,
filled with hatred toward one another"
Evidence 2: "Or we can make an effort, as Martin Luther King did, to understand
and to comprehend, and to replace that violence, that stain of bloodshed
that has spread across our land, with an effort to understand with
compassion and love."
Elaboration 1: The main part of this is that you should speak up and make a effort so you can get your freedom, like the evidence said, you should make a effort and make it non violent
Elaboration 2: Continuing to move foward and move on from what's wrong and do something about it by making a movement, like it cites in this evidence, that you can move in the direction Martin Luther King did in a group
So to say the least, you should move on, speak up for your freedom :3
Explanation:
:3
Like they really did. some people use it as a metaphor
There is no error in the above sentence
Brittany thought it was best she get it over with, "I have something to say, Shannon. I am the one who told Toby that you liked him.'' Shannon's eyes widened and her cheeks flushed red, "What? You did what!?'' "I'm sorry! I thought I was helping, you see," Brittany stammered. "I overheard him on the bus talking to these two guys, saying how much he liked you and didn't know who you were, and I ,well, I thought that it wouldn't hurt to say, so I said." Brittany's hands were sweaty; she felt a little dizzy with fear; Shannon was going to be so mad. "How dare you, you cow! You, you, oh!" and Shannon began to cry.
Or alternatively (with a few changed words to make it flow a little smoother):
Brittany thought it was best that she get it over with, "I have something to say, Shannon. I am the one who told Toby that you liked him.'' Shannon's eyes widened and her cheeks flushed red, "What? You did what!?'' "I'm sorry! I thought I was helping, you see," Brittany stammered. "I overheard him on the bus talking to these two guys, saying how much he liked you and didn't know who you were, and I ,well, I thought that it wouldn't hurt to say, so I said it." Brittany's hands were sweating and she felt dizzy with fear; Shannon was going to be so mad! "How dare you, you cow! You, you, ugh!" Shannon began to cry.
