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"I took from my waistcoat-pocket a pen-knife, opened it, grasped the poor beast by the throat, and deliberately cut one of its eyes from the socket!"
Answer:
"Nothing shocks me, I am a scientist". I had lived by that for years, decades even. Nothing affected me, from horrific lab accidents to terrible mutations. They were all just things that could happen and then happened, nothing more, nothing less. But sometimes-sometimes you see something. Something you were not meant to see. Something not of God. Something not of The Devil. Something not of anything you know. Something that was not for your eyes and your eyes have been punished for it. Your mind has been punished for it. You have been punished for it.
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D. This excerpt reflects a combination of text structures.
"in the snow *was one of.."
"offers more *then a time for *children to have fun.."
"to do in the winter now and it's unfortunate.."
"..find the wintertime unpleasant"
"should *go outside and enjoy.."
"I am glad I grew up where it snows"
I recommend these changes as well as limiting the number of times you say snow and replace it with a different word, as well as using more descriptive adjectives