The achievement of the Federalist Era would be the following: Ratification of Constitution, Washington's willingness to surrender power at the end of two terms and worked out pressing economic and foreign relations problems. Their failure are the following: Divisive political parties, Whiskey Rebellion and also the Large National Debts.
A prose poem.
When we look at the poem, “In This Moment,” by Ales
Debeljak, it can be a bit confusing to try to qualify it as a poem because it
resembles so closely a narrative. However
when we read it, it does have the rhythm of poem as well as all the imagery one
might associate with a poem. Works like
this are known as prose poetry. As such,
“In This Moment” is a prose poem.
What exactly is the question.
Answer:
After changing the pronoun focus, the sentences can be:
Walking is one of the best forms of exercise because it helps one lose weight and improve one's cardiovascular systems while one enjoys being outside in the fresh air.
(Alternative answer - see the explanation below)
Walking is one of the best forms of exercise because it helps people lose weight and improve their cardiovascular systems while they enjoys being outside in the fresh air.
Explanation:
When writing formally, we must avoid permeating our texts with sentences that are too personal. Formal writing demands impersonality, which makes it sound more trustworthy and unbiased. Therefore, using the first person "I" should be avoided. One way to substitute it is by using the pronoun "one", as we did in the first answer above. Some people find it difficult to use "one". If that is the case, we can always use "you" or "people". These do not sound as formal as "you", but are still less personal and informal than "I".
