Answer:
you need to add some commas and you need to add "the" in front of reader
The second sentence doesn't make sense.
Explanation:
I would suggest using Grammarly and proof reading your work at least 3 times out loud.
Answer:
1. My eyes couldn't focus; my contacts were drying out.
2. It wasn't his turn, but I asked Jackson to take over driving so that I could rest.
Explanation:
correct grammar
