As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tr
ee that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle. Why does the summary need to be revised?
Answer: The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas
Explanation:
From the summary given above, there's no connection in the revision made. There isn't any transition from the words given. The ideas aren't connected at all.
Therefore should have been a connection between how jealous the neighboring hunters wee of Neiterkob and Enkai relationship, what they did to show their vengeance and so on.
With regards to the summary given in the question, it lacks transitions that connect ideas.
Dexter is Our Hero, the main character of "Winter Dreams." ... Dexter's main goal in life is to make tons of money and improve his social class. He dreams of actually playing golf with the rich men he caddies for at the Sherry Island Golf Club.
