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Answer 1

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My dream

When I was younger, i dreamt at becoming popular at studies sand it also have been fulfilled. Two years back, I had taken admission to another school nobody knew,  I studied well.  it was a quite unique for becoming famous.it was a rule to keep our textbooks in the cupboard. Once our maths teacher entered, and my class metes were shouting my name "SALENA, SALENA! so that they get their books and then maam asked "who is SALENA?" so i raised my hand in an embarrassed manner. And from then on my teachers started noticing me and realized that I am a brilliant student.

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Answer 2

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My dream,

When I was young, I have dreamt of being popular for my studies. It is also fulfilled in my school. I was known for my work, devotion to studies.

2 years back, I took admission to another school. None knew that I studied well. I became famous soon. It was hard for students to carry heavy books, a rule was made to keep all books in cupboard.

I had been made as monitor of that shelf and I had the keys. It was maths class and as our teacher entered the class, all my classmates shouted my name, "SALENA! SALENA!" so that I could give their books.

Mam out of frustration asked "Who is SALENA!?" and at that time I raised my hand from behind my mam. Then my teachers started noticing me and realized me as a brilliant student.

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