Don't be intimidated!
Here, I'll go first.
1. <em>I</em><em> went to a comic convention once and I was with my family so I was a little nervous about it since I'm a bit insecure about my interests. Anyways there was a lot of noise and confusion so we just followed the crowd into the building and walked up and down all the little shops and vender carts. it was really noisy so I had trouble talking to my family, so we went upstairs to see the cosplay runway instead. </em>
2<em>.</em><em> </em><em>I</em><em> cluched my bag close to my chest as the crowd inched towards the glass entryway of the building; a building I wasn't sure my family would enjoy yet. We hadn't waited long, but the drive had already work away most of my patience. I tapped my fingers against my arms until my mom, dad, sister and I were each given silver entry cards. As I tugged my hair out from under the card's necklace, the blue tarp was pulled away to reveal the convention. Hundreds of banners hung from the ceiling above large, vibrant signs pinned to the tops of rows and rows of different stands. People rushed around, shopping bags already filled as they shrieked and shouted past each other. I lead my family through the crowds with a wicked grin, abandoning my insecurities as my eyes danced across soft plushes, plastic figures, leather jackets, mystery boxes, and costumes. Cosplays, I corrected my family, as I asked for pictures with them. My sister held her ears, groveling at the building headache we all felt. With ease I navigated the crowd, twisting between the movements with chaotic rhythm, dancing in harmony. </em>
Ok that's 194 words. See, it's just about being more descriptive about the things that matter and skipping over more redundant phrases like "then we went upstairs." Try to really capture the fwel of the moment, using lists and easier sentences to quicken the pace and more punctuation to slow it down. Good luck!
"They provide a framework that enables wider engagement in the whole political process. Through these political parties, anyone who is an American citizen is able to run for office, and anyone can vote and express their preference for any one party."
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Is there a way you can give the text of 'When Playing Video Games Means Sitting on Lifes Sidelines'? I can't answer your question based on the title.
Explanation:
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My dad <u>is</u> a lovable bear this morning. He <u>comes</u> into the kitchen and <u>gives</u> our mom a big bear hug while she <u>makes</u> breakfast. Then he <u>roams</u> through the house and <u>growls</u> at us kids to get up. While we <u>eat</u>, he <u>tells</u> us the latest jokes and <u>laughs</u> louder than anyone. Then he <u>gives</u> us a list of chores to do and <u>cautions</u> us to finish them. We <u>look</u> at each other and <u>race</u> to the window. We <u>sigh</u> with relief. Our bear <u>is</u> only <u>taking</u> out the garbage!
I noticed you got a couple wrong so compare them to mine :))
Have a nice day !!
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B: to emphasize the father's determination to find help for his son.
Explanation:
The author's main purpose for including these words spoken by the father is to emphasize his determination to find help for his son, and there are some words or phrases in them that seem to express this idea, such as "..I'll find somebody to take care of you."; "..there's a doctor...I'll take you to him."; "I've carried you for hours, and I'm not going to leave you lying here..."
