"The War god stalks our streets", could be considered a metaphor I guess, but other than that I can't see any other figurative language. But I hope I helped, have a nice day :)
But this is a nice passage it has a lot of imagery and descriptive words.
Mistake is the Keyword because if you wouldn't have made a mistake in the first place you wouldn't be abashed in the first place. Abashed is another word for embarrassed/ashamed.
