Fragment...because they are not telling what kind of <span>special</span> creatures.
The excerpt is an example of dramatic irony, as the audience knows something that Jim does not.
I think maybe, the issue is the lack of emotional resonance, and the use of terms like “or anything”. Younger people tend to use these terms, and have less power in the emotional realm, at least when it comes to expressing themselves. So, maybe try lessening the terms that are flounce-y and deepen the emotional aspect of this essay, possibly? Just suggestions from an outside eye, good luck!
Explanatory! Read that wrong. You have to explain the sequence of events. C.
Answer: ight later I’m doing a diagnostic
Explanation:
