Squeaky is full of pride at the beginning. She doesn't see Raymond's ability to run fast in the beginning, at the end she realizes how he always managed to catch up with her when she went somewhere. Squeaky was a bit ignorant at the beginning.
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Antony begin his speech with the words "friends, romans , and countrymen" to suggest that he and his listeners all share commonalities
By saying that words, he appeal to his audiences and creating the atmosphere of solidarity between him and the audiences
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I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
He feels like if Its Prejudicial to Bot give education to Slaves when everyone should get education equally.