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The Giver Denmark's baby naming issues reveals values that the society decided were important enough to enforce through laws is described below in detail.
Explanation:
A New baby (plural Newchildren) is a recently born baby in society. They are presented by Birthmothers. If fitted, they will be granted to their authorized origins and given their titles in the Naming function. If not, like James for example, they will be determined Undecided and retained in the Nurturing Center
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im doing this so i ca get pointss
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