I love going to the zoo with my dad. <u>Many</u> of the animals are cool and we like looking at <u>them,</u><u> </u>especially lions because <u>they </u> are really big and strong. Big animals cause no harm when they are locked up in cages. My father says that animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and that I shouldn't worry about them.
Explanation:
some repeated nouns must be replaced the they, them etc.
