Answer:
My friends and <u>I</u> are going to take a walk along the beach at sunset and then
build a bonfire.
Explanation:
Answer:
The phrase that makes this thesis statement wordy is: electronic mail.
Explanation:
Wordiness refers to making something longer than it should be, that is, using too many words to express something. In the case of the thesis statement we are analyzing here, all words seem to be necessary with the exception of the final phrase. As we know, "electronic mail" is no longer an expression in use. It's been decades since it has been replaced by the shorter version "email", "e" standing for "electronic". Not only does using "electronic mail" make the sentence wordy, it also makes it sound old-fashioned.
Answer:
Grunkle Stan Pines baked a cake but forgot to add sugar; therefore, he took one bite and spit it out.
OR
Grunkle Stan Pines baked a cake but forgot to add sugar. Therefore, he took one bite and spit it out.
Explanation:
What is "Grinkle Stan Pines" ??
"Therefore" is not the appropriate word here, but your instructions say to correct only capitalization and punctuation errors.
Answer:
Full of conflict and chaos
Explanation:
"As they shout, accuse, scream, interspersing with cuts of TILT SHOTS OF HOUSES." That sounds pretty chaotic.
