Question

Select the answer that is the best revision of the following sentence: When they reached the summit of Haleakala it was almost dawn, they took pictures of the sun rising over the volcano rim.
a. When they reached the summit of Haleakala, it was almost dawn, and they took pictures of the sunrising over the volcanic rim.
b. When they reached the summit of Haleakala, it was almost dawn, they then took pictures of the sunrising over the volcanic rim.
c .When they reached the summit of Haleakala, it was almost dawn, they took pictures of the sun risingover the volcanic rim.

Answer 1

Answer:

c .When they reached the summit of Haleakala, it was almost dawn, they took pictures of the sun risingover the volcanic rim.

Explanation:

As you can see, the phrase shown in the question aciam, presents a sequence of activities that a group of individuals performed on the summit of Haleakala. These activities must be separated by commas, however, as it is a sequence of activities, it is not correct that the last comma is accompanied by the word "and", which means that option A is incorrect.

It is also not correct to use the adverb "then" after the pronoun "they", which indicates that option B is also incorrect and option C is correct.