This one might be pretty common but it says "I like cooking my family and my pets" now that doesn't sound right at all but if you look at it with commas "I like cooking, my family, and my pets" now it might sound a little better.
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She is at recess, the kids pulled her arm hair.
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Once upon a time a dragon who wanted to be a chef, his name was Coquito. He always spend his time reading cooking books and watching series about how to cook better. One day, a friend of him sent a recipe of Coquito to a cookingcontest. Then, the judges called to him. He noticed that he has won it. So he spent the rest of his days cooking for the people who loves him.
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Lets see! You can do a story of a man that is tying to get his gardening done all by himself and then he finds a snake in his grass and hes trying to get it out but it wont leave. He tries all of these ways to get the snake out but they dont work and then a young man tries to help him but he wont allow him to help. Until eventually the man tries to pick up the snake and then gets bit he then looks around at his yard and then he see's that if he had just have listened to the young man his yard wouldnt have been ruined. You can do something like that! Just add some dialoge and some ideas and you'll be good!
When Obama says " Last year, we relied less on foreign oil, than in any of the past sixteen years" he is using persuasion. He is persuading the listener by appealing to their sense of being independent from having to get oil from some of the foreign countries that we were at war with. When he states "A strategy that's cleaner" he is appeasing the people who are environmentalists and who want to do what they can for the planet. He also manages to intrigue the common working man by stating that the country will be "full of new jobs."
