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Mashcka [7]
3 years ago
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HELP!! 60 POINTS!!!!!!!!!! You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article. Then you will write a reflection

on the changes you have made. You will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and the reflection paragraph.
View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission.

Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise. Copy this paragraph into a new document.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for any use of passive voice. Revise those sentences.
Write a short reflection paragraph on the revision process. Describe the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.

the paragraph:
English
2 answers:
Leno4ka [110]3 years ago
4 0

Answer:

what is the paragraph i have to revise?? i will help you but i dont have the paragraph

Explanation:

LuckyWell [14K]3 years ago
3 0

Answer:

so i will wirt a pargh lilke a boock and put words and chater bu no chapters and no title

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