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Answer:
You should include why you have that idea as part of your writing with facts or statistics to support your main point. :)
Explanation:
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Main point: Dogs are better pets than cats
Supporting detail: Dogs will want to make you feel happy where cats don't really care how you feel.
Supporting fact: A study conducted by Department of Psychology at St. Bonaventure University reported that dog owners laughed more than cat owners.
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He’s angry because the men didn’t arrive yesterday like they should’ve. Hope this helps!
Greg shows himself to be a dynamic character in this passage.
Explanation:
Greg shows himself to be a dynamic character as he changes and learns the worthy moral over the changes he had seen. He comes to view that a particular person should not be valued over their looks.
According to Lemon Brown, Greg is very caring and Brave person as he lost his son in the war. These all incidences changes the view in thinking of Greg towards his father.
