Answer:
This is a personal paragraph, so try to re-word it so it sounds like you (so the teacher doesn't suspect anything)
Explanation:
2041, that's <em>five</em> presidents away from now. With that, a lot of things probably have changed, jobs, clothing, movies, life styles, a LOT of things would change. Looking at jobs in 20 years from now, I would probably work at some company, or some good job I'm at that pays around 60k-70k. Maybe currency has changed, it could all just be digital, or not, since it's only 20 years. I couldn't think how my family would look like since I'm not even 18 yet. I'm more of a present minded person, so I just hope things don't spiral out of control by the time of 2041
What is your favorite band that is still together? I need it for the essay.
edit: here's a starter because I can't think of anything else:
Last night. It was then that the best night of my life took place. I went to a Maroon 5 concert! It was amazing,but I did have a bit of a headache afterwards. There were so many lights from the stage and fellow fans’ glow sticks and phone lights,it was almost blinding! They even played Girls Like You with Cardi B
Muir's use of diction in this paragraph, clearly shows how effective his language. The bolded words, like difficult, force, crooked, struggling, etc. create a tense, painful, and frustrating mood. Muir uses these words describe how his journey was through the wading bogs, and swamps and he uses these words to describe what he went through before finding the Calypso Borealis.